Write an MPT Letter To Opposing counsel

If you're in the NY video lecture, you learned how to write a letter to opposing counsel.  Here's mine.  It has all the required elements - including a body.  How many points is this worth?

Edits in Red, based on comments from A-Minus.

Dear Fuck Face, esq.,

I think you are wrong and your client is an idiot.  

In conclusion, you're you are dead wrong and I'm am gonna win.

Love, me, esq.